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My favorite style of dress is casual style. First it's informal. There is no typical structure. In addition, I can organize individaully. Second, there are variety range of styles. There are sporty casuals, hip-hop casuals, and so on. Third, it is cheaper than traditional, or uniforms. Casual clothes are often in department stores, and it is mass produced.
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P108 Q2 T2
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My preferred way of learning is listening. first, it is much more faster. You say more words in 30seconds than you read. Second, listening is much more social. a lot of people are involved in listening. On the other hand, a book includes no one. And Third, you can focus or put more concentrations. You can take better notes than listening.
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P109 Q3 T2
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The man's preference for the format they should use for their project report is doing the web page. First, Steve, a member of his group, knows how to do it. He has done it before. Second, it would be good for his career. Doing the web page would be a good skill to have. Third, it is much more creative. His group has only done the oral report before, so it would felt like new.
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P110 Q4 T2
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Works and family role for men and woman are different. First, men have to work and plus, they have to take care of their family, so they are more seperated. Men get emitional strains, and this leads to negative effect. Second, women are the family rulers. They spill into works. When their children are sick, they have to stay home and they get stress.
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P111 Q5 T2
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The man's problem is that on the spring break, he cannot go to the beach because of the biology trip, and he doesn't know what to choose. The woman suggests two options, wheter to go to trip, or go to beach with positive and negative effects. In my opinon, the man should go to a trip. First, he can get great experience plus great report. And second, it would be a good opportunity to prepare for the job after the graduation.
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P111 Q6 T2
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According to lecture, the human hand is valuable possession in that the human hand made development of the human culture possible. The human hand is a tool, toolmaker, and an extension of the brain. The hand is capable of bruthe strength and can perform hard, ` ` ` labor. It is also capable of delicate tasks, and sensative to slight changes in form and texture. And the hand has two important characteristics. Those are opposable thumb, and double grip.
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2 comments:
John,
Make sure when you explain your ideas you are able to connect your examples and details to your main points. Sometimes you give a main idea but fail to give a good example of the idea. What I mean is that, if you say, "The man prefers to create a website for his project because it will allow him to express his creativity," then you need to explain how that will be creative. I've made some grammar and word choice corrections below and uploaded myself recording them to your snapdrive folder.
Q1
My favorite style of dress is casual. First it's informal. There is no pre-defined structure to it as there is with, for example a suit that requires matching pants, jacket, dress shirt and tie. In addition, when dressing casually, I can arrange my outfits however I want. Second, there are wide range of styles available. There is sporty casual, hip-hop casual, and so on. Third, casual clothing is cheaper than traditional clothing or uniforms. Casual clothes are often in department stores, and are mass produced.
Q2
While some student would rather learn by reading, I prefer learning by listening. First, it is much faster. You can say more words in 30seconds than you can read. Second, listening is much more social. At least two people are involved in listening. On the other hand, a book requires just a book and a reader.
Q3
The man's preference for the format they should use for their project report is a web page. First, Steve, a member of his group, knows how to do it. He has done it before. Second, it would be good for the students' careers. Learning to design a web page would be a good skill to have. Third, it is much more creative. His group has only done the oral report before, so the web page would allow them to express more creativity rather than doing the same old thing.
Q4
Work and family roles for men and woman are different. First, men are better able to separate work and family life. They have to work, and they have to take care of their family, but they do not carry the stress of home into the workplace the way women do. Women tend to have their family issues spill into the workplace. When their children are sick, they have to stay home because they feel obliged to do so. However, this causes a women stress because she feels as though she should be at work.
Q5
The man's problem is that during spring break, he cannot go to the beach because of the biology trip, and he doesn't know whether to go on the field trip or go to the beach with his family. The woman discusses the two options and the benefits and drawbacks to each. In my opinon, the man should go on the field trip. First, he will gain valuable experience. Plus, he'll be able to write a great report. And second, it would be a good thing to write on his resume when trying to land a job.
Q6
According to lecture, the human hand is an invaluable possession in that it made the development of the human culture possible. The human hand is a tool, toolmaker, and an extension of the brain. The hand is capable great strength and can perform hard, intensive labor. It is also capable of delicate tasks, and sensative to slight changes in form and texture. And the hand has two important characteristics. Those are opposable thumb, and double grip.
John, one last thing...overall, you are simply not developing your ideas as well as you could. Be descriptive when you speak. Use examples and if you need to, use more than one example to explain an idea.
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